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Pain.
Darkness.
Everything’s blurry and then the world explodes
into my half-opened eyes.
Ecstasy as Her voice blossoms in my mind like a trillion explosions,
or a thousand cannons firing,
all at once.
My eyelids open a tiny sliver more,
letting me view her faint outline for one last time
before I sink back into
the darkness and the restless sleep.
Black motes float lazily across my vision.
Pain.
Darkness.
How long must I lay here
in this cursed sleep?
A lingering hand on my forehead,
smooth silk against burning hot skin.
She whispers once more,
unaware of my stoic awakening.
Paralyzing pain envelops me,
every nerve firing at once.
A groan escapes my dry lips.
The whisper rises to a shout.
Her melodious voice once more explodes
into my mind
as She unknowingly calls for those who keep me in this
wretched state.
They come,
footsteps echoing across my
consciousness.
How long must I wait before She figures it out?
Frantic clicking
as the footsteps disappear beside me.
Another wave of pain
as the numbness resides,
Another groan emitted from between
my twitching lips.
A finger jerks unsteadily,
signs of awakening
from my drugged body.
Did they notice?
A metallic taste- the metal pole
shoved between my teeth.
One more inch,
my hand and arm awaken.
The groan becomes a frantic plea to stop
as a needle is brought out,
filled with blue liquid.
Her voice,
quieter now,
gently caresses my ears
as she puts the pieces together.
It’s a race against time,
against the sharp metal curse.
A bright white light blinds me
as my eyes shoot open,
startled by the pain of a needle.
The sharp metal and its promise of painful sleep
find their way into my shoulder,
spreading fire throughout my neck.
The plea becomes a hoarse shout,
freezing my face into a grimace of hurt.
So many times I've gone through this,
each time failing to stop my fate.
The arm jerks uncontrollably,
knocking a hand from the cold metal syringe.
Too late.
Pain washes over me,
the waves pushing me further towards
unconsciousness.
Her face,
silhouetted against the light,
worrying just above mine.
The cool silk of her hand
caresses my burning cheek once more,
and Her whisper carries me off
to the cursed realm of restless nightmares.
Her words echo in my mind,
over and over,
penetrating the feverish dreams
brought on by the contents of the syringe.
“I’m sorry.”
Amazement at how much one is aware of
after such a long period of unawareness
floods my diminished senses and I fall
once again
into agonizing semi-consciousness.
Pain.
Darkness.
Maybe next time the footsteps will be foiled.
Maybe next time…
I’ll wake up.
Darkness.
Everything’s blurry and then the world explodes
into my half-opened eyes.
Ecstasy as Her voice blossoms in my mind like a trillion explosions,
or a thousand cannons firing,
all at once.
My eyelids open a tiny sliver more,
letting me view her faint outline for one last time
before I sink back into
the darkness and the restless sleep.
Black motes float lazily across my vision.
Pain.
Darkness.
How long must I lay here
in this cursed sleep?
A lingering hand on my forehead,
smooth silk against burning hot skin.
She whispers once more,
unaware of my stoic awakening.
Paralyzing pain envelops me,
every nerve firing at once.
A groan escapes my dry lips.
The whisper rises to a shout.
Her melodious voice once more explodes
into my mind
as She unknowingly calls for those who keep me in this
wretched state.
They come,
footsteps echoing across my
consciousness.
How long must I wait before She figures it out?
Frantic clicking
as the footsteps disappear beside me.
Another wave of pain
as the numbness resides,
Another groan emitted from between
my twitching lips.
A finger jerks unsteadily,
signs of awakening
from my drugged body.
Did they notice?
A metallic taste- the metal pole
shoved between my teeth.
One more inch,
my hand and arm awaken.
The groan becomes a frantic plea to stop
as a needle is brought out,
filled with blue liquid.
Her voice,
quieter now,
gently caresses my ears
as she puts the pieces together.
It’s a race against time,
against the sharp metal curse.
A bright white light blinds me
as my eyes shoot open,
startled by the pain of a needle.
The sharp metal and its promise of painful sleep
find their way into my shoulder,
spreading fire throughout my neck.
The plea becomes a hoarse shout,
freezing my face into a grimace of hurt.
So many times I've gone through this,
each time failing to stop my fate.
The arm jerks uncontrollably,
knocking a hand from the cold metal syringe.
Too late.
Pain washes over me,
the waves pushing me further towards
unconsciousness.
Her face,
silhouetted against the light,
worrying just above mine.
The cool silk of her hand
caresses my burning cheek once more,
and Her whisper carries me off
to the cursed realm of restless nightmares.
Her words echo in my mind,
over and over,
penetrating the feverish dreams
brought on by the contents of the syringe.
“I’m sorry.”
Amazement at how much one is aware of
after such a long period of unawareness
floods my diminished senses and I fall
once again
into agonizing semi-consciousness.
Pain.
Darkness.
Maybe next time the footsteps will be foiled.
Maybe next time…
I’ll wake up.
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(This must be the longest open poem I've ever written in my life )
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This is so beautiful, eloquent, painful to read and yet you can't take your eyes away...there are not many talented poets here on dA in my opinion and you are on top of the list. Please keep it up, it inspires me to read others' thoughts.